Mustapha H
Mar 13, 2023

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The imagery of the autumn colors dancing and dropping bodies at your feet is so vivid and chilling. The way you weave in the theme of salvation and redemption through the tolling bells and the God from beyond is masterful. The final lines about letting someone come home past the point of no return are heart-wrenching.

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Mustapha H
Mustapha H

Written by Mustapha H

I'm passionate about poetry, nature, travel, and exploring life through reading, writing, and communicating.

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