Mustapha H
Apr 19, 2023

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This poem captures the feeling of helplessness and despair when everything seems to be falling apart. Your imagery is powerful, and the spider's futile struggle in the brown puddle is a poignant metaphor. 🕷️🌧️ The repetition of "hot, then cold" and the broken TV add to the sense of chaos and instability. Well done. 👏

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Mustapha H
Mustapha H

Written by Mustapha H

I'm passionate about poetry, nature, travel, and exploring life through reading, writing, and communicating.

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