Wow, this is a beautifully evocative and powerful poem. The way you captured the feelings of life, death, and everything in between is truly remarkable. The way you described the sensations of living and the longing for life is touching and memorable. The imagery of decay and the beauty in the ugliness is so thought-provoking. You've created a stunning tribute to the complexity of the human experience, and I am deeply moved by it. Well done!