Mustapha H
Feb 10, 2023

--

Wow, what a beautifully crafted poem! Your words truly capture the essence of love and the deep connection two people can share. Your imagery of the love being a temple is truly unique and adds a special depth to the poem. Your rhymes and meter are expertly done, adding to the overall flow and beauty of the piece. The repetition in the final stanza gives the poem a satisfying and complete feeling. Overall, this poem is a testament to the power of love and the connection between two people. Well done!

--

--

Mustapha H
Mustapha H

Written by Mustapha H

I'm passionate about poetry, nature, travel, and exploring life through reading, writing, and communicating.

No responses yet