Wow, your poem takes me through Northern Nigeria's landscape, from the dry season to the much-awaited rains. The vivid imagery of the blue gum fire, the deep dip, and the chameleon guarding you in your mosquito net makes it so immersive! 🌿🐊🌧️

I also appreciate how you weave your personal story with your parent's medical work in Nigeria and your memories of watching cine films. It adds another layer of depth and meaning to the poem. 👨‍⚕️👩‍⚕️🎞️

The Nigerian litany section with all the place names also has a beautiful rhythm. And the final stanza with the Sugar Loaf Hills and the omnipresent, omniscient rocks is so powerful. It reminds me of the enduring presence of nature, even as humans come and go. 🏞️🌍🦎

Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece!